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    Zany
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    Personal Poem (?)

    It's hard to fight when you've been knocked down.
    A child who has had the child smacked out of them.
    As you stand back up it's there to trip you and kick you.
    And the one that is there to give you a hand
    is already on the ground, sick.

    Feelings that are nonexistent choke you.
    Wrap around your brain, pulling all your thoughts to the surface.
    It plagues you, and nothing can stop it.
    And the one that wants to give you a hand
    has proved they're incapable.

    Exhausted mentally, sick and tired.
    You give out all you can to those who need it.
    Just to be ignored and become the doormat.
    And the one that is not there to give you a hand
    doesn't realize how much it's needed.

    But you have to keep pushing, all your life.
    What else can you do?
    There's a life worth living, through it all.
    It takes a while, it's not on your terms.

    But it will happen, and it will be all the more sweet
    when it does.
    Last edited by Zany; 07-13-2017 at 06:09 PM.

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    Big Cheese Blitz Canavi's Avatar
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    Very inspirational Zany!

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    Happier, gratefully. Kamiroo Wolf's Avatar
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    I like it a lot! There's a sense of perseverance that I love, but I'm terrible with interpretations so I can't say much more than that. All in all, great poem.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Blitz Canavi View Post
    Very inspirational Zany!
    Thank you, Blitz

    Quote Originally Posted by Kamiroo Wolf View Post
    I like it a lot! There's a sense of perseverance that I love, but I'm terrible with interpretations so I can't say much more than that. All in all, great poem.
    It's based around what's been going on with me. I appreciate your feedback, I don't normally do poetry a lot so it's good to know you enjoyed it.

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    Yes Sottocapo imaginary's Avatar
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    Aw it's ok Zannee you're still a child

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    We're with you every step of the way, Zany!
    Formerly known as "AliGamer911".

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    Quote Originally Posted by AliGamer911 View Post
    We're with you every step of the way, Zany!
    I appreciate the love.

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    Yes Sottocapo imaginary's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by AliGamer911 View Post
    We're with you every step of the way, Zany!
    No leave her alone wtf

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    Love you, and your writing

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    Quote Originally Posted by OmgItsFallen View Post
    Love you, and your writing
    Love you and your writing too <3

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