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    Talking Selth Level Thread

    give me feedback on my levels
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    and more to come

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    Quote Originally Posted by Selth View Post
    give me feedback on my levels
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    I'd say it has potential but I you put effor and creativity. Next time try to put detail and different tile for the outside walls.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Gimpoo View Post
    I'd say it has potential but I you put effor and creativity. Next time try to put detail and different tile for the outside walls.
    I'm going to update it a gfx staff will make a sign for it

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    Try putting windows on the outside to give it that hospital feeling...if you know what I mean.
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    So cute and it's pretty good, a bit plain tho

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    Quote Originally Posted by Selth View Post
    give me feedback on my levels
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    Hmm I've been on this server before. Yesterday, I think. Someone kept killing me with a "Bloody M4" and my friend got jailed for talking

    But about the level, you should remember that bigger hardly ever means better when it comes to leveling. You should define your walls better, along with using a better image for the doors. Also, the roof tiles do not match the building- you should always create a general theme when you're making a building to avoid this kind of thing. The roof-access wall/building looks odd, you should extend it. Before I forget, add windows to your buildings(Don't overdue it, though).
    Last edited by John Ares; 07-22-2017 at 05:10 PM. Reason: Forgot to critic

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    Quote Originally Posted by John Ares View Post
    Hmm I've been on this server before. Yesterday, I think. Someone kept killing me with a "Bloody M4" and my friend got jailed for talking

    But about the level, you should remember that bigger hardly ever means better when it comes to leveling. You should define your walls better, along with using a better image for the doors. Also, the roof tiles do not match the building- you should always create a general theme when you're making a building to avoid this kind of thing. The roof-access wall/building looks odd, you should extend it. Before I forget, add windows to your buildings(Don't overdue it, though).
    He was unjailed XD
    Ok john aka Era Pc Server Admin

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    Quote Originally Posted by Selth View Post
    He was unjailed XD
    Ok john aka Era Pc Server Admin
    Hey hey hey, it's "Era PC Co-Manager" now. But anyways, best of luck to you with your levels and ultimately, your server!

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    Definitely put more defining features into it, as windows, stoops, etc.

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