some are older and the mistakes have been fixed example the huge lobby is an outdated picture
Feedback please comments are accepted .
My MasterPiece..
some are older and the mistakes have been fixed example the huge lobby is an outdated picture
Feedback please comments are accepted .
My MasterPiece..
Last edited by BaileyVandenbroek; 08-10-2017 at 12:15 AM.
I mean they look pretty good I guess but the first one has way too much windows imo.
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The second, sixth and eighth levels appeal to me.
I have zero clue what is going on in the other levels.
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To start off, I have no clue what the theme is on the server you are on, So I'm rating this based on How the tiles are used (Especially in iEra/Era).
The top of the windows (shown in Green), are just so confusing in my opinion. This seems to be your style which is nice, however I just feel like your execution is incorrect.
You need to take things slow and not make it look like there's too much going on.
The parts in brown/red signify that you need to link the Lining borders together.
The parts in yellow indicate the execution is wrong. Notice how you take the wall back one, yet you don't do the same to the border.
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This level is literally a flat house.
The reason is, you've added no tiles to represent the roof slanting down (on the backside). I've indicated where you need to add the tiles.
Also link some of the adjacent roofs together. The level walls seem very repetitive. Variate your design a little.
"A fool thinks they know everything but a wise person knows there's something to learn from everyone"
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"Great leaders don't complain about the tools they are given. They work to sharpen them"