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    Troy's Level Thread

    Hi,Im Troy ive been leveling for 1 month so i decided to post my levels here!and also im an Lat on an server named Quebecois1996 Im still kinda a noob so i wanted you guys to feedback about my levels

    here are few of my levels:
    House
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    Road
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    I will be posting more soon!

    (Attached Thumbnails Was the old ones )
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    Last edited by troygraal; 12-28-2017 at 07:37 AM.

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    Hi Troy, your levels look amazing for only 1 month experience. Only a couple minor mistakes that will be very easy to notice and patch up other than that great work bud
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    Thank you! about the mistakes elaborate please? I'd like to fix them

    - - - Updated - - -

    I found the mistake
    Screenshot (74).jpg
    Is it right? Let me know if there is still mistakes! Thanks for the feedback

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    Quote Originally Posted by troygraal View Post
    Thank you! about the mistakes elaborate please? I'd like to fix them

    I found the mistake
    Screenshot (74).jpg
    Is it right? Let me know if there is still mistakes! Thanks for the feedback
    Yes please
    That looks so much better now.
    Also, for the little building on the roof, the heights of the walls are not the same, so they shouldn't connect like that - that's what I think at least
    Other than that, good work

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    Quote Originally Posted by kaku View Post
    Yes please
    That looks so much better now.
    Also, for the little building on the roof, the heights of the walls are not the same, so they shouldn't connect like that - that's what I think at least
    Other than that, good work
    Thank you!
    I've fixed the heights (Updated)
    Screenshot (86).jpg
    Good now? Thanks for the feedback!
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    Last edited by troygraal; 10-30-2017 at 01:13 PM. Reason: changed picture

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    Quote Originally Posted by troygraal View Post
    Thank you!
    I've fixed the heights
    Screenshot (75).jpg
    Good now? Thanks for the feedback!

    -https://www.era-go.com/forum/member.php?14336-Josh-Graal
    Last edited by kaku; 10-30-2017 at 01:14 PM.

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    very nice.

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    Woahhhhh looks amazing. GOODJOB!
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    Cute! maybe make the bottom windows bigger though?

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    There should be 'shading' here. due to the sun light.
    The door needs an outline.
    The windows need an outline, so it makes the windows pop.
    You don't need to 'outline' there due to the fact of the bush being there.
    The roof needs outline for the sunlight

    Otherwise things look good.
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