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    Post Some of my poetry from when I was like, 10

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    When I was younger, I guess you could have called me the quiet, depressing kid. I loved to write, and I excelled in the language arts. I had a whole journaldedicated just to poems and what was on my mind. So I'll be sharing at LEAST two of my favorite poems I wrote, maybe three I don't know. Enjoy!
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    This is probably my saddest one>
    Tears.
    Laying in the cold, brisk night.
    My happy thoughts have gone to lost,
    I feel a warmth come down from my cheek, touching my ear,
    More of that feeling rushes down my seemingly lifeless expression,
    They don't stop.
    They roll down, and land on the dry, soft pillow,
    As time passes, the pillow is then hardened, and damp.
    It's hard to breathe,
    My throat contracting, gets tighter by the moment,
    I wan't to scream.
    The endless feeling of a pit in my body doesn't leave,
    I whisper.
    I lay still.
    My body in shock of all these unknown expressions as I cry for help,
    I finish,
    I turn on music, and rest my somnolent-like eyes, just to wake up in the morning a force a smile.
    I then share what I have, but nor to I feel.
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    'Nother somewhat edgy one?
    Endings.

    Every story has a beginning.
    A plot.
    A antagonist.
    The victim.
    The warrior.
    You, You are the protagonist.
    You have a story.
    You choose what happens throughout your journey.
    Whether be happy, or sad.
    Your choice,
    But after all, stories are just folktale.
    Reality is sufferment and pain.
    What route is yours?
    You choose,
    You chose.
    They followed.

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    Gosh, that was intense. Hope you enjoyed, share some of yours too! <3
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    You wrote this when you were 10, correct? How old are you now?
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    for a 10 year old, you sure had some dark thoughts.
    J-sdfohjsdofjsodjf O-sdfjsdlfhlsdhf E-abfbabf Y-dkfbajdhf. That's what my signature would look like if it was in handwriting
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    Quote Originally Posted by Joeyaudi1 View Post
    for a 10 year old, you sure had some dark thoughts.
    You didn't?!

    I wrote a whole book on it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BL1NK View Post
    You didn't?!

    I wrote a whole book on it.

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    Not at 10 haha
    J-sdfohjsdofjsodjf O-sdfjsdlfhlsdhf E-abfbabf Y-dkfbajdhf. That's what my signature would look like if it was in handwriting
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    Quote Originally Posted by Joeyaudi1 View Post
    for a 10 year old, you sure had some dark thoughts.
    Yeah, I did LOL
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