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    Aloha's Level Thread

    Hey guys I'm new to leveling and I just wanted some constructive criticism on how I could improve! Keep in mind that I am not able to use GraalEditor so I am limited on what Tiles/NPCs I am able to use. This is my first ever level I have made. I am currently using Gonstruct so if you have any tips for Gonstruct or how to add more NPCs it would be greatly appreciated if you left them down below!

    https://imgur.com/a/NhCDmAq

    Leave Feedback down below as I will be regulary checking this Thread.
    Last edited by ember; 06-24-2019 at 03:11 AM.

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    Hey Aloha! I'd love to give you some feedback on your levels but it seems as if the link is not working!
    Feel free to ask any question!

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    Quote Originally Posted by kaz210 View Post
    Hey Aloha! I'd love to give you some feedback on your levels but it seems as if the link is not working!
    Sorry about that! Link should be working now!

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    Quote Originally Posted by ember View Post
    Hey guys I'm new to leveling and I just wanted some constructive criticism on how I could improve! Keep in mind that I am not able to use GraalEditor so I am limited on what Tiles/NPCs I am able to use. This is my first ever level I have made. I am currently using Gonstruct so if you have any tips for Gonstruct or how to add more NPCs it would be greatly appreciated if you left them down below!

    https://imgur.com/a/NhCDmAq

    Leave Feedback down below as I will be regulary checking this Thread.
    Allow me to...

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    Thanks I was having trouble uploading photos!
    Aloha from the 50th State

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    Quote Originally Posted by ember View Post
    Thanks I was having trouble uploading photos!
    Anytime lad
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    For a beginner I think you're going the right way in terms of levelling. I highly suggest that you study most of the levels in-game and use them as a guide for all the tiles that you use. Places such as bases, gunshops or even just the streets are the best guide to begin with
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    What Minho said, I think a good idea for you would be reading my tips about leveling in the 198th edition of the Era Newspaper.
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    Not bad for a first level. Make sure to study the game's perspective, as I see a lot of mistakes in your level. Things such as the table and the huge walls are specific points of interest.

    Make sure to focus on the size, especially in the second level where walls are 2 units tall, less than a player's height. Walls inside should typically be 4 - 5 units tall.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Minho View Post
    For a beginner I think you're going the right way in terms of levelling. I highly suggest that you study most of the levels in-game and use them as a guide for all the tiles that you use. Places such as bases, gunshops or even just the streets are the best guide to begin with
    Thank you! I will for sure start taking a look at the levels in game. Thanks for the feedback

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    Quote Originally Posted by kaz210 View Post
    What Minho said, I think a good idea for you would be reading my tips about leveling in the 198th edition of the Era Newspaper.

    Thanks will do!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gabipants View Post
    Not bad for a first level. Make sure to study the game's perspective, as I see a lot of mistakes in your level. Things such as the table and the huge walls are specific points of interest.

    Make sure to focus on the size, especially in the second level where walls are 2 units tall, less than a player's height. Walls inside should typically be 4 - 5 units tall.
    Yes I realized I messed up on the tables after I had taken a look in game after I finished. I’ll try to get a better understand of the walls a unit sizes! I did not know about that Thank You! I’ll be editing and posting a revised version later today.
    Aloha from the 50th State

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