Kendrick First Level!

[Kendrick]

One if my level maybe for a shop...era level.jpg not done yet
update: level2.jpg

[3.X]

The darker wood tile on the far left connecting the tables vertically doesnt seem right in my opinion. Thats the only thing i can tell otherwise i like it

[ROCK]

They're to many free space, put some NPC, and try to decorate the floor by putting some carpets, and don't make your levels rectangular/square...move the top table( the stand where u put the npc in) 1 tile up.. This table looks like a part of the floor. And I can suggest you to put more NPCs on this table.

[Ek CM Bolivar]

Are yiu using PC era tileset? Because I do not recognise that wall tile. Also fix the top of the wall as this makes the wall look rectangular, if you know what I mean. Maybe make the tables for the items different shapes, and add more furniture like paintings, chairs etc. Maybe also add more NPC's too, and try to change the outside shape so it isn't as square. But the idea is great!

Not trying to offend you

[Hayze]

1. Make your level unique, it's bland.
2. Why is it square? Make pillars, corners, edges, curves!
3. Your level needs to be made in the mindset of a player, make a logical path for the player.
4. Too much open space
5. Counter is ugly, wood on wood? ew. (my opinion).
6. Good attempt, keep working!