Summer Hat Contest! (Migrated)

[Kendrick]

Well here it is, the watermelon hat, lol! Watermelon reminds me of summer, I always eat it at the pool.

Anyway, I tried haha.
WatermelonHat.png

Many errors in this hat. I understand that you tried your best, but bear with me.
First step; fix outline.

Your outline is consisting with one thin and the other 2x thick. Have it thin. Keep it clean.

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Summer-duck-hayr-final.png

Finished product, Not to good or bad...

~ Hayr (Bumbag buds)

Not yet, buddy boy.
I don't know how you shaded your brown, but it looks pillowshaded.

http://opengameart.org/content/chapter-5-color-palettes

Take a look at that.