Hello, I am new to the forums.
From what I've seen and heard this is a very nice place to express opinions and criticize people's work. Just yesterday I picked up a copy of HitFilmExpress (free) and started video editing. I was up all night finding out the functionalities of all the tools and how to use them.
Without further ado, my first video. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SfUIZmlwAqk
Keep in mind this was made as a short film just to test my editing abilities.
Feel free to criticize as you please. Any feedback is helpful to me.

Hope you all have a great day, thanks! =D