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    the story of the Forest of Disaster ( WARNING: concludes fiction and horror )

    As anyone know, the story is mostly a fantasy-like story with some horror in it, be warned if this is not scary enough, my bad...

    Chapter 1: The forest of Disaster

    At the Beginning of Autumn, i walk across the streets of my neighborhood with a smile on my face, i used to been told not to get in the forest of Disaster at all cost, thanks for my curiosity, i went in the forest with a spell-card that i wasn't suppose to use, i will also bring my soul-orb just in case something bad happens.

    As soon as i walked in, it looks like a normal forest to me, but then i was starting to feel a little bit aware that this place is starting to feel wierd, i took my soul-orb and set a spell on it, as soon as i finished, the sky went red like blood and suddenly the bats came down to the ground and turned into a demon with a vampire cape holding a gigantic sword, i was shocked so i cast my spell, the demon blocked my ray like it was nothing, then he came and said: "Hold it young one, i am not here to fight, i am here to warn you to not continue to get in the forest"
    as ignorant as i am will hardly listen to him then i ran back deeper int he forest, the demon followed me and said: "fine if your that ignorant, i will just go back and let you in, but be warned to be careful" he left and he droped a spellcard called "summon demon", i feel a bit better and i went in deeper.

    but then i saw a girl with a knife fell to the ground, i ran to her and asked if she was okay, she look badly hurt, but when i look whats behind her, i see a dead man with their whole body cut off, then suddenly when i look back at her, she was gone and left a message: You will Die, at first i was really scared and took out my soul-orb, casting a protection spell and went back exploring, it's a good thing that i casted it because when i accidently trip something, thousands of knifes came flying to me and it's a good thing i cast the spell or else i will die, then the girl came back walking here Yandere like and tried to kill me, her face was smiling like verry creepy and said: "I WILL KILL YOU AND YOU WILL FEEL THE PLEASURE OF GETTING KILLED", by reflex i cast a chaos spell: Black confetti rain, as soon as i stunned her, i hurried got back up, then i send her flying with my blast spell, i was scared enough to cast another protection spell...

    End of chapter 1...
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    Chapter 2: Death and Demise

    As soon as got to the middle of the forest, i see something magical in the middle circle, i see a huge magic circle that had looked like it has been there for a long time, i ignored that circle and continued my way but i might have had accidently fixed the circle magic which suddenly turned into dust, i shocked and look up in the sky, it was pitch black, the ground suddenly turned into water but not water, it's red water like pure blood, i started to feel a bit dizzy and when i look at my hands, it looks like it's melting, i wasnt sure what happen but it hurt, i didn't scream, i kept the pain in me and tried to relax, it looks like an illusion but it felt so real... i closed my eyes and i can't open it again.

    But in some time... i woke up finding myself in a bed with my hand covered with bandages and seeing some part of my body covered with bandages, at that time, i felt safe, as soon as i realised that i was in a room ( not scary but felt safe ) i saw the Demon that i saw earlier and said: "good morning, you have been sleeping for a long time... i thought you were dead..." as soon as he said that... i come to realised and ask: "what date is today", he answered that it was in 31 october 3017, i was shocked, he said i had been sleeping for years, but yet... the magic circle, i came to remember... the memories... where my parents died, they die because of somebody blasting them with a powerfull ray...
    i cried...

    the Demon said that this is now my new home, he built it in the middle of the forest after the magic circle is gone and said that he turned me immortal with infinite mana so that i can defend myself but in exchange he took a spell from me, it's the spell that i have never used, Chrono spell: Damage time, since i got all the stuff he gave me, he took the spell so that i wont be able to use it for my advantage..., he do that for my safety... but then... i feel the memories coming back to me of where my parents got killed, my mom was about to be blast by that spell but my dad shielded her with his spell but his spell was too weak, and it broke, it killed my dad... then my mom got stabbed in the back with a magic knife... they got killed infront of my eyes... because of me..., i got careless and got caught in the trap, in the end, my parents are the one to suffer...

    i came back to senses and he asked me: "where do you even got this powerfull spellcard anyway?", i answered completely that after my parent got killed, the man felt pity of me and gave me the spellcard and said: "we will meet again... but in a complete time... you wont be able to remember me and this form..." at that time... i feel so lonely... i live alone in a cottage next to the forest of Disaster and abandoned it after i went in the forest... the Demon told me that my old cotage was now demolished... thats the reason why the Demon built this house in the first place... he gave one condition that he is suppose to be able to stay in the house with me just incase something happens...

    After i agreed, i went back traveling, as i left, the demon smirked ( the bad way ).

    End of chapter 2...
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    Chapter 3: The faking Demon

    As soon as i got out exploring, i saw another Demon, he looked like the one that protected me... he looks injured, i came to him and asked what happen and he said: "run... that demon... is fake...." but then i decided to ask him: "who are you", he answered that he was the Demon who warned me to get out of here at once at the beginning.

    As soon as we finished discussing and letting me know whats going on... he told me to get the card back, because now he trust me to handle the spellcard will be a good use to me..., after i herd it... i went back into the house... i asked the demon in my new house ( what he said :/ ) for my card back... for some reason he didn't agreed... he gave me his spellcard insted Brutality Spell: infinite blades rain, i asked him why did he gave me this card insted by the looks of it... the spellcard is a SS rarity... i was shocked... i kept asking him to gave back my spellcard and he gave me this... but then he said: "dont worry about your card... did you look behind the spellcard i gave you? it's the card that you wanted"...

    Soon i came to think who is actually the fake demon, suddenly i herd the knock at the door... as soon as i opened it... i saw nothing but the circle magic is back... by the second i looked back... the demon is gone and i saw on my desc that the summon card: Demon... it looks the same but the rarity turned into A+ insted of A, i wonder why...

    suddenly i felt another pain in my body that i can't bear to handle... when i started to feel a bit like faint feeling... i.. saw a glimpse of a woman with knifes... she reminded me of someone but as soon before i fainted... i saw a Demon, hitting the girl... killing it with his Giant sword... i don't know who he is... my vision is starting to faint more and more... then i decided to close my eyes... i hardly can't wake... trapped in this endless nightmare... which make me unable to wake... but i can still feel... someone lifting me up and i herd a faint sound from the side: "Grab him... we will make sure to extract the power from him"

    I felt scared but the sound became fainter and fainter and fainter... untill i can't hear nothing but the sound of the Demon that was with me all the time telling me to use the spellcard now...

    End of chapter 3...
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    I loved your story exceptionally in the beginning of chapter 2 when you described the water which I pictured in my mind that something very demonic was about to happen... then BAM!! Your hands start melting and you go into a deep sleep.


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    Chapter 4: the nightmare which will never End

    it's dark... very dark... too dark to even compare... it filled my soul with darkness..., i never felt anything like this before...
    i feel nothing but pain... too much pain..., when i woke up... it's all just a dream... i am still in the circle of Death and Demise... it's eating my soul little by little... draining my magic power... yet the card... all my spellcard are gone... ( exept for this one O_o didn't remember how did i get it... but it is a rare card... can't complain about that... ).

    i'm realizing... the house... the faking demon... it's all just an illusion... i can't compare... the darkness that i've felt... it's breaking me apart... i can only cast one spell... but i'll save the spell for later when i needed..., i feel so weak... my body.. it's turning into dust... my legs... my hand... all my memories... it's... pitch black... the last light in my soul... is depleting... it's going to end... before all of my body parts are gone... i left a tear... i cried... the only thing last of me is... my tear..., but the real me... i'm being consumed in the darkness of the circle... it's going to end...

    soon before i realised... i am not dead... i'm Teleported to this dimension... where any beings have never gone here before... the chaos world ( the chaos world is much worse than the underworld, so you might imagine... but it's not burning... it's neutral but more dangerous and scary than the underworld... )... the place looked like it is a wasteland of hell surounded by the floor of obsidian and filled with mist of miasma... for some reason... i am not affected with the miasma... but any spell i tried to cast is nullified... until i see him...

    The Chaos Beast... he looks like he is hungry from far far away... i saw his eyes... glowing in the miasma... it's red... verry red... until i realised... thats not an ordinary chaos beast... it's Death... i run the opposite direction from that thing... until i remember... the Demon... he was right... i should have not went here in the first place... everything... it's all my fault... where my parents died... now it's my turn... until i remember... the last words from my parents... "Live... Don't cry... you must live... for our sake..." until i finished remembering... that creature was in front of my face... opening his mouth wide... looking like he want to eat me... at the bare second... i dodge it and cast my only spellcard left... Chrono sign: Time damage...the spellcard who killed my dad... it's time to revenge... i used the card in the bare second... i am safe for now... the beast will gain damage every single second... sending the beast in a very Deep despair of Death...

    by the time i finished casting the card... i felt weak like all my energy was drained... i can't give up now... for my dad... for my parents and mom... i run as fast as i could before the spellcard is going to end... and i know the creatures in chaos world are not easy to kill... so i run again... i run for hours... and i don't want to stop... so for the moment... i'm running through this endless nightmare...

    end of chapter 4...
    to be continued...
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    chapter 5: moon rabbit

    my legs hurt... my heartbeat is too fast... i can't stop running... for my safety and the precious life my parents gave me..., but then... i decided to rest... in the middle of... nowhere... then by the time i sat down... i instantly fall asleep... i think the miasma has gotten into my dreams... for some reason... i dream of a Demon... telling me to get out of here... quick..., is it just me... or is this some kind of de ja vu??

    as soon as i woke up... i saw this rabbit... with red eyes... but not an ordinary rabbit... she looks like a moon rabbit... she looks like a woman in a tuxedo with double guns, red eyes and two rabbit ears... she looks like she was staring at me... holding her dual gun loaded with magic bullets... and at the bare second i jump backwards... preparing my spellcard again... then suddenly... she jumped to the sky and by the time i saw her red eyes... she casted a spell illusion sign: lunatic red eyes... and suddenly.. millions and millions of magic bullets are shooting at me... and suddenly... a card appeared at my hand called chaos sign: diverting chaosism... by the time i got it... i didn't had the time to cast it... all i do was dodge and run... the bullets are endless in numbers until then... i got shot on my hand but the bullet just passes through... and all the bullets... dissapeared... and then suddenly the moon rabbit came down again and said:"congratulations you survived my bullet hell... there are 2 of us more... find us... then you have the right to leave this place..."

    in the nick of time i stand up and i run insted of greeting her... i know it will be risky just asking her for advice but she did it anyway when i was running... she told me to go west... use the card that i just got from her for faster transport, then another spellcard appeared in my hand called Demon... i recognize this... this is the demon... from the start... i wasted no time, i summon the card and he asked me: "I TOLD YOU NOT TO MESS AROUND IN THE FOREST!!!!!", he got mad at me like he was my dad then i said... please... help me get out of here... then he said yes but only if i promise to listen to him next time... idk why is he talking like that but we left... he let me ride his back on our way to west.

    End of chapter 5...
    to be continued...
    stay tooned...
    Hello Grallians, My name is ZEROPHOS, ( ain't telln my real name -__ )
    i play in Graal Era and i run a gang named "Diversion skylordz"
    I hope we can meet in graal


    i will continue the story if there are more comments :
    http://www.era-go.com/forum/showthre...116#post174116

    http://www.era-go.com/forum/showthre...992#post176992

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    Season 2 chapter 1: the bamboo forest

    As i was walking with my demon to west, we discovered something even more amazing than a pancake with cream cheese, we found the portal to go abck to the normal lands , but as soon as we got in... we are not in the forest of death and not in our usual place... we are in a bamboo forest... it's a verry tall forest... while walking there... it's even worse... the monster there are stronger than the forest of death... as soon as i noticed... all of my spellcards are back..., the demon agreed that he will not ba an assistance anymore, he turned back into a spellcard and i walk alone through the bamboo forest.

    but then i herd a noise from a very close distance, when i turned back, i was ready to face who it might be... owh hey, it's just my old pall... the shrine maiden... she looks like she was trying to solve something.. like always ( lol ), so i went up and flew up to her and as what is going on, she told me that someone corrupted the moon, she hardly put 2 and 2 together so... yah, she accused me to be the one who corrupted the moon, she started attacking me... her boundaries are too strong... she is trying to kill me...

    as far as i know, she started to really taking a serious damage to me while all i can do is dodge, so i decided to just fight back, i casted a spell chaos sign: black confetti, as soon as i started casting the card, she stop shooting and now it's her turn to dodge, i took my chance, i wasted no time and casted: chrono sign: space disruption, i made her fainted instantly... i kind of regret it cause now i need to worry that all of her friends might be here to kill me... so i ran deeper into the bamboo forest

    end of season 2 chapter 1...
    to be continued...
    stay tooned...
    Hello Grallians, My name is ZEROPHOS, ( ain't telln my real name -__ )
    i play in Graal Era and i run a gang named "Diversion skylordz"
    I hope we can meet in graal


    i will continue the story if there are more comments :
    http://www.era-go.com/forum/showthre...116#post174116

    http://www.era-go.com/forum/showthre...992#post176992

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