Good start but sizing is not going to be very proportioned to graal characters on both views. The up/ down view is too wide and doesn't have enough variety in the linework or in its detail.
Also i've never seen a handle curve forward?
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Also our guns are black because we go for realism and because imo black fits all character looks, whereas if you have a desert or silver/white gun it will look weird on some peoples customs