nothing to see here lel
EDIT: There may be grammar errors, this story is still under editing so I may need to proof read again.
nothing to see here lel
EDIT: There may be grammar errors, this story is still under editing so I may need to proof read again.
Last edited by Rima Wasabi; 08-05-2021 at 07:55 PM.
The poor old man didn't make it
Formerly known as "AliGamer911".
Woah that was only the prolouge... I really like the story. Although one thing to note is that you over use commas (,). Some of them should be replaced with periods (.)
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