Detachable Tactical Rifle:
This is a beautiful rifle that can be taken apart and used as dual pistols at the press of a button.
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Detachable Tactical Rifle:
This is a beautiful rifle that can be taken apart and used as dual pistols at the press of a button.
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"'An old friend of ours dared me to try and play God...' Mak craned his neck, the advisors and guardsmen in his wake suddenly alert at their charge's blatant discontent.
He stood with a confidence we had never known him to possess, the bright orange trim of his ivory sleeves dangling so far from the scrawny arms folded behind his back that we thought the robe adorning his body might blow away completely in the winds that whipped around us.
'Little did they know I was born for the role.'"
Crap the colors inverted. Please stand by while we fix
Fixed
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"'An old friend of ours dared me to try and play God...' Mak craned his neck, the advisors and guardsmen in his wake suddenly alert at their charge's blatant discontent.
He stood with a confidence we had never known him to possess, the bright orange trim of his ivory sleeves dangling so far from the scrawny arms folded behind his back that we thought the robe adorning his body might blow away completely in the winds that whipped around us.
'Little did they know I was born for the role.'"
It looks weird. And you need more shading.
Rifle is supposed to look weird
"'An old friend of ours dared me to try and play God...' Mak craned his neck, the advisors and guardsmen in his wake suddenly alert at their charge's blatant discontent.
He stood with a confidence we had never known him to possess, the bright orange trim of his ivory sleeves dangling so far from the scrawny arms folded behind his back that we thought the robe adorning his body might blow away completely in the winds that whipped around us.
'Little did they know I was born for the role.'"
I spent a day on it...did the best shading I know how to...guns were supposed to look like that...
Fine I'll stop making Gfx...happy?
"'An old friend of ours dared me to try and play God...' Mak craned his neck, the advisors and guardsmen in his wake suddenly alert at their charge's blatant discontent.
He stood with a confidence we had never known him to possess, the bright orange trim of his ivory sleeves dangling so far from the scrawny arms folded behind his back that we thought the robe adorning his body might blow away completely in the winds that whipped around us.
'Little did they know I was born for the role.'"
Now I guess I'll be the critic. If you can't take my criticism go ahead and quit, but I recommend not. Anyways, the gun looks like crap, it's sort of odd shaped. Your shading is just well awful. The gun sprites are messed up, as this is not possible to gani the way it currently is.Originally Posted by Kamiroo Wolf
Some things I recommend for improvement would be you take a look at http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/foru....asp?TID=11299 you should also look up sprites or something around those lines. You made the gun image firing, which would be a problem for the ganier to make an idle image. Finally, you will also need to make images for the gun being taken apart, as it is unrealistic for you to just press a button and the gun is apart instantly.
nice it looks good gj
It looks great! Mind if I maybe edit it?
Do not stop making gfx. You are very talented with your work. Do not let them get you down like that.
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