Icandy like Imask said you need to add something interesting, I do suggest going and listening to old school beats from 1980-2000 to get an idea of old school instrumentals from back in the day as it might help you get that excitement and climax added too your beats, this is coming from a part time music producer,
don't get me wrong the second link is good but try not to cut off the beat in the middle and lower it to a small tone as it won't get anyone interested.
Here's one of my beats I had created 2 years ago take a listen
https://youtu.be/zyxITKWDZOQ