Quote Originally Posted by Hex View Post
I really like the second one but it ends too fast. It seems to not fit Eras theme.. Try something more traditional, with pianos or a similar instrument.
Agreed. I feel as if the song cuts off at the climax, or when things are starting to get interesting. As a beginner, it is important to power through this and continue your songs, by reaching the climax and 'releasing tension/uneasiness' (because that's what make songs interesting and catchy, the flow between tension and resolution).