I make grammar and spelling errors all the time. I hate when I do and don't catch them. But whatever the reason, It looks unprofessional to have spelling errors in a game.
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He's the guy from the main title screen. I just photoshopped him in a screen to show my concept. But yes I was thinking he should be the tutorial guy.
BTW I like your story idea. A little intro storyline great idea!!!