Quote Originally Posted by Kendrick View Post
There was no background information. =[ How about the description of the sewer?
"Walking on top of human waste gave me the urge to puke and worsen the water that iEra has down of its city. If only they really knew what was down here. A criminal on the loose, just walking beneath them.
-creeaaak-
Can it be him? If this criminal is close to me, I can finally shoot him and reward the cap. All I want is to get a promotion."

You dig? Story needs more information and details. Overall, it's a good, but very confusing story.
That was the point to want to know whats next cause it starts to explain the story at a police station but yeah. I was just keeping in mind the 11,000 word cap