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    First Level I have made

    Still working on it, but I gave up graphics too hard XD. So I made this level please review itAttachment 28833
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    Looks good keep it up

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    Quote Originally Posted by Blur View Post
    Looks good keep it up
    Thanks dude.
    Btw is there any LAT or levelers that can review as well?
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    Quote Originally Posted by JungleJimmy View Post
    Thanks dude.
    Btw is there any LAT or levelers that can review as well?
    Ik how to level dw i like it but maybe add some more detail

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    Quote Originally Posted by bluedragon123 View Post
    Ik how to level dw i like it but maybe add some more detail
    yeah i'm not done yet so
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    Make it a tiny bit less symmetrical, its far too symmetrical.

    Also, wrong section, could a mod move this to the appropriate section? Thanks.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Alkyone View Post
    Make it a tiny bit less symmetrical, its far too symmetrical.

    Also, wrong section, could a mod move this to the appropriate section? Thanks.
    Oh ok got it
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    Quote Originally Posted by JungleJimmy View Post
    Oh ok got it
    Moved it to correct section.

    Anyways, I like the colors.

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    Looking good. But you should probably not add those glass doors as windows. Use the same glass panes you used on the very right and left windows.
    Screen Shot 2016-10-10 at 1.08.34 PM.png
    And extend those windows so it'd look symmetrical within the front of the building.
    Screen Shot 2016-10-10 at 1.08.26 PM.png
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    Nice first level! I've outlined some things you could fix up:

    Red - Corner tiles should have been used here.
    Green - If that's supposed to be another story of the building it needs walls around the sides and back to distinguish it from just being a random flat wall. (I've outlined where these tiles could be)
    -I'd also suggest that you don't use the same tiles on the wall and roof.
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